I am a student at Yaldhurst Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora, I'm Maddie from Rimu. your blog looks very cool and unique and I am excited to read more. Maybe next time you could make your own images and share those as well, I like how you added in links. Maybe you should add in some capital letters but it still is an amazing post. this reminded me of when I learnt about learn create share.
I liked how you set out your slides. This reminds me when I did hero work. Maybe next time you could add why you posted this. Did you enjoy posting this? kind regards Ian
I love this deatall Karlie!!! also make sure that you have got enough writing on each post to get lots of comments! make sure you get enough postie calm and helpful comments make sure i can comment whenever i like no matter what. AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hi Karlie, I love how you've made the effort to make a presentation with google slides. I do this, as you can make your presentation really interesting and colorful.
To improve next time, you could try using different colors together because on your first slide it was hard to read the letters.
It's Isaacfrom Rimu. your blog looks very cool and unique and I am excited to read more. Maybe next time you could make your own images and share those as well, I like how you added in links. Maybe you should add in some capital letters but it still is an amazing post. this reminded me of when I learnt about learn create share. by Isaac
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Kia ora, I'm Maddie from Rimu. your blog looks very cool and unique and I am excited to read more. Maybe next time you could make your own images and share those as well, I like how you added in links. Maybe you should add in some capital letters but it still is an amazing post. this reminded me of when I learnt about learn create share.
ReplyDeleteKind regards, Maddie.
Hi karlie, its Ian from rimu.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you set out your slides. This reminds me when I did hero work.
Maybe next time you could add why you posted this. Did you enjoy posting this? kind regards Ian
I love this deatall Karlie!!! also make sure that you have got enough writing on each post to get lots of comments! make sure you get enough postie calm and helpful comments make sure i can comment whenever i like no matter what. AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteHi Karlie,
ReplyDeleteI love how you've made the effort to make a presentation with google slides. I do this, as you can make your presentation really interesting and colorful.
To improve next time, you could try using different colors together because on your first slide it was hard to read the letters.
Thanks,
Ariana, Yaldhurst Model School
It's Isaacfrom Rimu. your blog looks very cool and unique and I am excited to read more. Maybe next time you could make your own images and share those as well, I like how you added in links. Maybe you should add in some capital letters but it still is an amazing post. this reminded me of when I learnt about learn create share. by Isaac
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