T4W1 writing letters

This week my class write some letters to places that we went to in the holidays come and have a look at mine.

42 Amuri Ave,

Hanmer Springs 7334

To Hanmer

pools and thermal spa.

Your pools are great But the highdroslide need an alovt and when you go on the slide and you land in the water gets in your eye an when you are in the slide the water splashes in your eye.the lazy river is cool but you ran into people and the at is embarrassing and bad. The pool cod be abet deeper. the rook pools cod abet deeper.when you land in the pool from the slide the pool cod be beper so i don't go to the bottom.the dark slide is dangers and cod be a bet litter so i don't go all over the place. I like how there's heaps of pools to choose from. The pools are not to cold but not to hot witch is good. The bands are good how the jang the color every day. I don't like the line that you have to wht. The little water is cool prank but small it cod be bigger. the lit slide is to slow make it faster.the slides are the finest part bat they cost money and i don't get to go on them mach that suck doesn't it.not going on them match mens not match fun.but your changing rooms very cold besides your sowers are hard to  work so maybe if you put a paper instructions on the wall that will de essayer to work the showers. But i like the tog driey that is cool. And i like how the changing rooms are so big and i like how there are some like little rooms but the bad art is they have no door and i will like a door to have some privacy and you have to bring your on shop an codishan and shampoo that sucks you cod split the shop sondpoo an condsan. There could be moor pool to rent around and play in that will be better.karlie