I am a student at Yaldhurst Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia Ora Karlie, Im Maddison a year six from Rimu. I really like that you have made the front page nice and bright and it really caught my eye and it is super pretty. A quick tip to help you could be to give all of your slides backgrounds. Maybe next time you could make a body for the face Kai Pai. Kind Regards, Maddison from YMS.
Hi Karlie, its Ian from Rimu class. I liked how you set out your blog post. This reminds me when we had to read our stories to class. Maybe next time you could add why you posted this. Kind regards Ian.
hi Karlie, Isaac from Rimu. I really like that you have made the front page nice and bright and it really caught my eye and it is super pretty. A quick tip to help you could be to give all of your slides backgrounds. Maybe next time you could make a body for the face Kai Pai. Kind Regards, Isaac
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Kia Ora Karlie, Im Maddison a year six from Rimu.
ReplyDeleteI really like that you have made the front page nice and bright and it really caught my eye and it is super pretty. A quick tip to help you could be to give all of your slides backgrounds.
Maybe next time you could make a body for the face Kai Pai.
Kind Regards, Maddison from YMS.
Hi Karlie, its Ian from Rimu class. I liked how you set out your blog post. This reminds me when we had to read our stories to class. Maybe next time you could add why you posted this. Kind regards Ian.
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ReplyDeletehi Karlie, Isaac from Rimu.
I really like that you have made the front page nice and bright and it really caught my eye and it is super pretty. A quick tip to help you could be to give all of your slides backgrounds.
Maybe next time you could make a body for the face Kai Pai.
Kind Regards,
Isaac