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Thursday, 27 September 2018

T3W10 WRITING

this week I  have written about the nasty old pirate  everyone has been doing something  different.
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2 comments:

  1. Miss Walters28 September 2018 at 13:45

    Hi Karlie,

    Well done on posting your first story to your blog! You have worked really hard to make your story look great and used a variety of different fonts to make it appealing to a reader. Next time make sure that you buddy check your writing to check for full stops and capital letters!

    From Miss W

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  2. Anonymous19 October 2018 at 11:26

    Hi karlie

    I think you have done a good job on your first story blog post. next time I think that you should change the colour of the slid because it is to bright to read with the text that you are using. I really like how you have used a slid for you story blog.

    good job karlie

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