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Tuesday, 18 September 2018

My First Post EVER!

hi, my name is Karlie. I like playing a sport like a leg and others. at school I am in a Chera club with my friend's chole is the captain. I live in Christchurch I live with my mum and my older brother my dad and sister dos not live with me. 

I am nine years old the youngest in the family. I am a girl. I like going caping staying the night in a tent is cool.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Karlie I can not understand what you are trying to say in the first sentence.I love how you said that what sports you love and the people that you live with and do not live with and your family.Next time I think you could check your spelling when you post your blog.Next time could you shrink your writing.

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  3. Hi Karlie,
    I love your first post, how you've included so much information is really effective and it's good how you haven't included too much private info online.

    In your next post, maybe you could show/tell us about what the 'Chera Club' is, because it sounds fun and exciting!

    Can't wait to hear from you in your next post,
    Ariana,
    Yaldhurst Model School

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